Today I was learning how to use a hook sentence,paragraphs,dialog and describe,what we saw and how we felt.
I enjoyed sitting on boy.
I enjoyed sitting on boy.
I found it challenging to spell some people's names.
I found it challenging to spell some people's names.
My digital learning object shows what happened in the holidays.
My digital learning object shows what happened in the holidays.
Next time I would change my font to be creative and unique.
Next time I would change my font to be creative and unique.
Kia ora Jasmine
ReplyDeleteMy name is India and I am in Room 9 at St Mary’s School in Gisborne.
I really liked how you give detail and information.
I learned that you went to a horse competition. On Saturday.
Maybe you could add a little more detail.
From India.
Hi jasmine gr maybe you could add the colour of the car Wii U meet.
ReplyDeletebut I relly relly like the of your writing. from Jasmine gi
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