Wednesday, October 20, 2021

My friend

 

Today I was learning to retail a story.

I enjoyed writing this story.

I found it challenging to do that beginning, middle and end.

My digital learning object shows anyone can be anyone's friend.

Next time I would change nothing.

1 comment:

  1. Kia ora Jasmine,
    My name is Matua Whitu and I am in Room 9 at St Mary’s School in Gisborne.

    Positive: I really liked your colour coding of the text box's and you organisation of your recount.
    Helpful: Maybe next time pick one font colour per text box.
    Thoughtful: You really captured the essence of this story through visual pictures. Great work!



    From
    Matua Whitu

    ReplyDelete

Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments:
Positive - something done well
Thoughtful - a sentence to let me know that you have read, watched or listened to my blog
Helpful - give some ideas for next time or ask a question

Note: Only a member of this blog may post a comment.